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Mr. Jameson by ~alfonz:iconalfonz:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed


HELLO MR JAMESON ARE YOU LOOKING FOR ME?
IM OVER HERE PLEASE COME, I NEED SOME COMPANY.
TELL ME A STORY OF YOUR TRAVELS FROM LAND TO
LAND THE PEOPLE YOU HAVE SEEN.
TELL ME A STORY OF YOUR TRAVELS FROM SEA TO SEA,
ALL OF THE STRANGE THINGS YOU HAVE SEEN.
OH MR JAMESON WHY CANT YOU BREATH,
YOU WERE NOT THERE FOR ME.
TO TEACH ME TO RIDE A BIKE TO PUSH ME ON A SWING.
HELLO MR JAMESON!
WHATS THAT YOU CAUGHT SOME MYSTICAL DISEASE.
ALL YOU DO NOW IS SLEEP NO MORE TRAVELS FOR YOU,
NO MORE TO SEE.
OH MR JAMESON HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME! TO
YOUR FAMILY.
MR JAMESON THE DOCTOR SAYS YOUR A VEGTABLE! HA
WHAT DOES THAT MEAN?
OH MR JAMESON YOU JUST CAME PLEASE DONT LEAVE!
MR JAMESON...
DADDYTELL ME A STORY OF ALL THE AMAZING THINGS!
YOU WERE NEVER THERE FOR ME DADDY
YOU WERE TO BUSY DISCOVERING FOREIGN LANDS,
MEN WITH WINGS ALL THE THINGS THAT MAKE MY DREAMS!
WHY WERENT YOU THERE DADDY!?
WHY...
DADDY
MR JAMESON I PRAYED FOR YOU TO COME HOME.
NOW YOU ARE JUST...
YOU’RE JUST DEAD TO ME.
IM STILL ALONE
©2005-2009 ~alfonz
:iconalfonz:

Author's Comments

this was written as a song and i got bored and i decided to upload it here i hope you like it i am very proud of it i guess it could be a poem as well but hey thats up to me

enjoy it!

AlfonZ

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~pinkowleyes Jan 22, 2005, 2:31:53 PM
oooo i like it i really like it
:iconalfonz:
~alfonz Jan 22, 2005, 2:39:58 PM
thats fantastic thanks :D
:iconnyathril:
~nyathril Jan 23, 2005, 10:28:25 AM
wooo!!!! thats coooooooolll!!! heheh :P

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how many times can it change,
how long will i be restrained,
it's appalling to think that,
all my time seems to be wasted,
will it stop or is it only the beginning(chimaira-down again)

always the protector,
never the protected...
:iconcansrox:
~cansrox Jan 23, 2005, 10:33:13 AM
it's great. first i thought it's written as a poem, but when it's a song, i would've liked to hear it

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my newest portrait drawing: [link] / admin of ~archiffect
and ma best architecture pic: [link] / moderator of ~art-masters
:iconalfonz:
~alfonz Jan 23, 2005, 11:29:45 AM
yeah thanks i was unsure about it at first but hey if the chillis can turn poems into songs so can i
i think
:iconcansrox:
~cansrox Jan 24, 2005, 1:13:27 AM
can you also sing?

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my newest portrait drawing: [link] / admin of ~archiffect
and ma best architecture pic: [link] / moderator of ~art-masters
:iconhauntedbella:
~HauntedBella Jan 29, 2005, 8:48:33 PM
That was good!!! Nicely done!!! :clap:

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:blackrose:"If theres one thing i believe, its that i dont know anything and anything can happen"--Amy Lee:blackrose:

:heart: I am the Goddess! :heart:
:iconalfonz:
~alfonz Jan 30, 2005, 3:09:17 AM
thanks it kinda just flowed out of me it was so easy to write and yeah thanks again :)
:iconaimme:
~aimme Jan 31, 2005, 8:05:42 AM
wwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww thats deep!!and kinda sad but really good!!
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